Cold hi’s and cold goodbyes
Fake smiles;
I came thrice
This distance feels so sexy;
Don’t love me, just need me
Don’t hug me after you hurt me.
Sleeping far apart; aching muscles
Sore private parts
This can’t be love, this can’t be love
I don’t know what to name it
You make me feel so good;
I’ll ride you and eat you and
Have you fuck me while I’m stood
Passion; stronger without the love
Pain; but we can’t stop
I’m my mouth; on my skin
Bite my neck; bite my chin
You came but didn’t look back at me
Didn’t look at me smile in pleasure
You came but didn’t kiss me
You didn’t hug me after
Beat me good and leave me dirty
Of you; I want to be afraid
Do you believe me? Do you believe me?
Then choke me harder than I can take!
– Gunjan Sethi
Oh dear
Beautifully articulated piece !!
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Raw, passionate, desperate; I felt all these elements while reading this. Lovely β£οΈ
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No shortage of passion here π I do like the style, very blunt and suits expression the poem
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Lovely writing
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Okay π
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oh my god, girl.
I’m feeling your vibe!
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Visceral lines throughout … fucking love it
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There’s a lot going on here, I’m letting it all sink in.
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Well written
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Love thisπ
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Very intense!
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Thank you!
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Intense, deep & crazy beautiful lines
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